Disobedience to parents brings destruction - Cautionary tale

 Remember the post on a Cautionary Tale? If not,check it out! 

It was made by my sister for her school project on grade 7 English. Now I've got to the same lesson,and here's my cautionary tale.

                                                  DISOBEDIENCE TO PARENTS BRINGS 

                                                                    - DESTRUCTION-

There was a girl whose name was Jude,

She was known to be extremely rude.

She wouldn't ever listen to her Mum,

instead she would consider her dumb!

Even when Dad would advise her,

It wouldn't Matter-

Because Jude would never Listen to anyone.

No matter how hard her Parents would try,

Jude would never give a single reply,

except she would make horrible cries,

So her parents would allow her to do whatever she wants to do,

not Having even one clue!

So one fine day,when no one was home,

when Jude was just Alone,

She decided to do something that she was always warned about,

something that caused her to Doubt.

For she wasn't allowed to handle

any fire - even candles,

which was a great displeasure to Jude!

But this time she Was just in the perfect mood

to try the danger of fire,which she believed wouldn't cause any harm.

If you only were to see how she was calm,

Knowing that touching fire 

would indeed make her a liar!

Because when Mum and Dad return,

having believed that Jude promised not to burn -

Any thing in the house,

and getting Fire caught in her blouse!

It only began like this,

but after-all Jude is now really missed.

Jude began by touching it,

only a little bit.

She didn't come to realize,

rather she was totally hypnotized,

about All the Glimmer,

and all that made the fir fire Shimmer,

Until the fire caught her hair,

making her feel pain that she wasn't able to bear!

But it was already too late - 

something occurred that her parents would really hate!

Jude was totally in ashes!

If she were to be alive,she'd deserve a hundred bashes!

For if only she hadn't been rude,

and so shrewd -

to her parents;

despite If they Were an abhorrence,

they meant Nothing but good,

and did all what they could,

but Jude was being so stubborn,

which made her end up in destruction.

                                                                       -  Khadijah Dilshad